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点评诗选（三）

点评淡淡的芸《十六字令四首》

（七绝，藏头）

兰幽淡淡送清香

荷濯漪涟沐日光

梅映漫天飞雪白

竹呈亮节气轩昂

点评了然子《七绝.秋夜》

（七绝，步韵）

夜阑孤影月光冷

一缕相思逐棹蓬

鸣笛声声风猎猎

漫山红叶血凝成

点评紫罗兰音画《娇艳欲滴的

兰花公主》

（七绝）

五彩缤纷吮雨妍

争奇斗艳舞翩跹

幽香沁得游人醉

脉脉含情笑靨怜

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